
A Podcast Listener's Success Story
In today’s Books with Hooks, Carly and CeCe each look at two query letters, and in the process discuss making sure interiority adds up—showing not just what a character thinks, but how they think; ens...
15 Joulu 20221h 15min

December Bonus Episode: We Answer Your Questions & Give You Comp Titles
In today's Bonus Episode, Carly and CeCe answer all your burning questions, in the process discussing whether agents ever ask for full manuscripts right after reading a query; whether query word count...
12 Joulu 202250min

When All the Rejections Become Resounding Yeses!
In today's Books with Hooks, Jessica and Kate join Carly and CeCe who critique their work, in the process discussing the important difference between a reader's curiosity about what happened before ...
8 Joulu 20221h 27min

The Importance of Surprising the Reader From the First Chapter
In today's Books with Hooks, Carly and CeCe each critique two query letters, in the process discussing WWII fatigue in the industry; the importance of the butterfly effect in time travel stories; how ...
1 Joulu 20221h 10min

Writing Strong Character Arcs That Are Tied to Character Wants
In today's Books with Hooks, Carly and CeCe analyze two query letters each, and in the process discuss what constitutes a long query, in respect of word count; how statements in dialogue shouldn't be ...
24 Marras 20221h 16min

Jeffrey Archer's 14-Draft Process & Writing Plots Twists vs Reveals
In today's Books with Hooks, Carly and CeCe are left unsupervised as they critique two query letters each, in the process discussing the best way to frame your novel if it has series potential; the di...
17 Marras 20221h 20min

The Importance of Having No Ego When Receiving Critique
In today's Books with Hooks, Carly and CeCe are joined by two authors, Melissa and Elizabeth, whose work they critique. In the process, they discuss ensuring each that timeline in a dual timeline is i...
10 Marras 20221h 29min

Adding Tension, Conflict and Stakes to a Novel That's Not Working
In today's Books With Hooks, Carly and CeCe look at two critiques each, discussing the importance of using sharp specifics and strong interiority; ensuring there’s tension and stakes in the first page...
3 Marras 20221h 14min



















