The Shit No One Tells You About Writing7 Des 2023

How Writing Interiority is Like Squeezing an Orange

In today's Books with Hooks, Bianca, Carly, and CeCe are joined by guest, Ronnie Alvarado, a senior editor at Simon Element. They discuss two queries, one of which includes a resubmission. The four discuss why agents might pass on a resubmission despite changes having been made; how info-dumping can keep readers from connecting with characters; why writing interiority is like squeezing an orange; typos in query letters; when adverbs are useful; and a prologue that works. After which, Bianca interviews Anise Vance, debut novelist of Hush Harbor. They discuss being intentional with your beginnings; Anise's inspiration and journey to publication; being open to R&Rs, particularly for the right agent; the worldbuilding required for dystopian novels based in real places; techniques to avoid too much telling when it comes to worldbuilding.Find us on our socials:Twitter: @TSNOTYAW @BiancaM_author @carlywatters @ceciliaclyraInstagram: https://www.instagram.com/the_shit_about_writing/https://www.instagram.com/biancamarais_author/https://www.instagram.com/carlywatters/ https://www.instagram.com/cece_lyra_agent/Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/TSNOTYAWWebsites: www.theshitaboutwriting.com, www.biancamarais.com, www.carlywatters.com and www.cecilialyra.comBookshop.org affiliate page: https://bookshop.org/shop/theshitnoonetellsyouaboutwritingMore information about Anise can be found at: https://www.anisevance.com/He is also on Instagram at: https://www.instagram.com/anisevance/?next=%2Fdrip.store.italia%2F

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